Feedback on initial start of a game

Sorry, the title sounds kind of odd since I’m not too sure what I would name this, basically some of you may know I’ve created a post about a one-piece game which if you are interested here’s the link:

Anyway, I’ve started the development on it and I’ve gotten to the starting. I would like the characters to be randomly generated based on preference. Here’s a small showcase of what I’ve done so far:

Please note that the Roblox Recorder is quite laggy and the quality is much better in-game, I would love feedback on your opinions, ideas and any suggestions before I proceed. Based on the responses I will create a character for the players and then load them into the world. Most of the things can be changed in game.

EDIT: The name will also be changeable.

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There’s only one thing I can really say at the moment, the text being put on screen is too slow, maybe double the speed. I had to wait for letters to type in when I was reading. It was a little slow.

The chat text should align with the ??? for the name.

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The text is kind of slow and glitchy due to the recorder, I will speed it up a bit though, thanks!

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