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Looks pretty nice to me, although what game/asset/group is this for?
Its for a parkour game, but the CTR is low.
This specifically: 🔻GoDown🔻 - Roblox
Seems pretty appropriate, but I’d question if the person is needed. You can keep it if you like but I’d suggest to remove it to make it look cleaner. Your decision.
Not sure what I am looking at. The clean font does not mix very well with the big mash-up of colours in the background, and it feels like the character does not fit in place. I think this needs to be cleaned up, and start using a more common colour theme. I think you can keep the character, it looks nice, but center it so it is more focused.
None of it blends together (30 chars)
Looks okay! Just okay. Outline the text with black. And try different colours to see what fits in it. 7/10.
Hmm…
What can I say about this…
Amazing!
Perfect!
Awesome!
The best GFX I’ve seen,
If it is your first GFX, then it is the Best GFX!
RENDER! Trust me, it takes 0 effort and will look a million times better than that gross R15 seam. Same with the lighting.
Woah woah woah, how to render the lighting?
You can just add a lamp. Watch this tutorial
Yeah, but for neon parts. that wont exactly work…
I guess I could put light emitting faces on every part, but that would probably take forever. By that point, I might as well make the whole scene on blender.
Not the background, the character
EDIT: Also you can just make a luminescence texture and add the bloom in post, that’s what I do
how to add bloom?
and how to add blur?
In what program? 30charactersomgg
You still have the R15 seams on it… Follow the tutorial I linked
I think the text should be relatively about the same size, it looks a little off the way you have it now. The blur effect you added recently for some reason has a lot of noise on it… makes it look less clean? It’s too fuzzy instead of blurry. I think the render should be bigger. There’s also a lot of colors clashing in the image. I think the render should be dressed with less purple/blue so it doesn’t go against the background. Likewise, the update bit probably shouldn’t be yellow and white as it’s hard to read against the green.
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