Feedback on low-poly build

Low poly builds

Hello. I recently made this shop/sell for a simulator. Please give me some feedback, thanks.

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I really don’t see much wrong with these I really like the look of them they look clean nice job mate, the only thing I see that I personally don’t like is the covers in the red and white a bit to small or thin something about them feels off

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Okay. Thank you for the feedback!

These are very-clean, simple low poly builds and I think they finish up quite nicely, the one thing that makes the build look strange is the red and white cover over the build as @taylorsmate62 stated.

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Alright, I will note that. Thanks for your feedback.

Great build! I can’t really find much to criticize this build, other than the fact that it may look cooler if the awning was connected to the building (see below)

Screenshot 2020-03-06 at 8.51.00 AM

Kinda like that. Also, making the awning slightly thicker wouldn’t hurt. Other than that, this is a pretty good low-poly build!

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Thank you so much for your feedback. I will look into it.

It looks amazing! My only suggestion would be to either add some transparency to the window texture or remove it completely. I believe that would make it look much more clean.

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The building has a fantastic look, and it really brings an amazing low-poly, clean details on the view. I also really like the window that has shades in it! It really fits the style as well.
It looks really nice, and you’ve done an excellent progress to your low-poly style of the building.

Keep up the great job! :happy3: :+1:

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Thank you very much for your feedback. :smiley:

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Looks good! Although I completely agree with what @saltyasiandumpling said about the awning. I love the simplistic design on the glass as well as the simple design throughout the build. It looks pleasing to the eye as well.

Keep up the good work! :slightly_smiling_face:

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Will keep that in mind. :smiley:

Looks Simple and there’s nothing I can say, except Incredible job. :happy3:

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Hello! I love the building, the style of these windows is beautiful and the colours you have chosen are pretty cute! There are not so many things you can change because it is already great, but I recommend you creating some details on the walls such as bricks and stuff. This would be great for the roof too. You could detail it a bit and I promise, it will look even better!

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They both look very cute and beautiful, i see nothing on it that needs to be improved. Good work!

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This is a very great low-poly build. Very simple and straight to the point. If it was my I’d probably change the glass, but that is just me. You’re build is awesome.

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These buildings look neat. If you were to put them into a low poly game, make sure the LightingTechnologyis set to .ShadowMap yo make it look more cartoony.

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Actually I already did that for my game :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:

Alright.
Also, I’m sure I’ve seen the red building in the toolbox before, not sure of it was yours but if you want to create popular games I’d suggest not putting them on the toolbox or else people can steal the assets.

Please contact me, i’d like to see proof because I created it myself.