Feedback on Manor Library

This is a commission I’m currently working on.
The map is purposely dark as it needs to have an eerie vibe.
Feedback is appreciated!

26 Likes

Awesome! it looks like it’s from harry potter or amnesia. This is really nice, the only things I could suggest is adding different colors in the books + ladders to reach higher books.

4 Likes

Looks pretty great. In order to make it more scary, you could add spiders around and make the bookshelfs look like they are old and broken.

2 Likes

Thank you! I’ll try doing this to see if it fits.

Thanks for the feedback! I’ll take note of this.

1 Like

wow, your work much more better then me because your work have a lot of detail on the build and also theme as well. not only that, the book look dusty on the bookshelf. i think you done an excellent job. i hope you post more about your build. anyway i will catch you really soon later…

2 Likes

Thank you so much!
I’ll post more of my builds as I make more in the future. :slight_smile:

3 Likes

Love the build so far! Im a big fan of the eerie/spooky vibe. :smile:
Critique:

  • Could use a lot more detail in the columns as this will make the build even more immersive. Add grooves within the pillar to give them depth and add more detailed patterns. The more detail the better! (Depending on what style you could be going for.)

  • Maybe add books lying around on the floor and make it look more natural. Make it look like as if a person was there previously. (Make a scene, for that will be more immersive.) Crumpled up papers and other messy things might help it a bit too :D!

  • Maybe adding some dust particles throughout the build might add even more immersion and make the build feel more old and eerie.

Im exited to see how you expand upon this build in the future! Good luck and keep on building! :smiley:

3 Likes

Thank you for taking time to write this. This is very helpful. I will definitely implement these!

1 Like

Looks great imo. It’s definitely got an eerie feeling to it.

2 Likes

Amazing build so far! Maybe consider adding open flame torches with actual fire particles to add to the eerie feel.

3 Likes

Thank you! Will surely take into consideration.

1 Like

It really gives me an Amnesia vibe with how dark and old the environment looks. Great job overall and I wish the best of luck to you!

1 Like