Feedback on Military GFX (Fairly New to making GFX)

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Hello!
My name is William and I wanted to make a new GFX. I am fairly new to making GFX and im curious on your opinions. Be as harsh as you want, I just want to improve.

Brittish gfx watermark
Brittish gfx watermark160×600 171 KB

Thank you.

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That is VERY nice, for a first GFX!!! All the elements seem to be perfectly balanced. Well done!

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  1. Add post effects (programs like Photoshop and GIMP)
  2. Center the character more. I know that’s hard to do on a 160 x 600 canvas. However, I’d rather see the character than the middle of the gun.
  3. Add a different background. Lots of times I just make the background with my GFX, rather than adding something in post-editing. It makes it look infinitely more realistic and convincing!
  4. Small touch, but I’d make the watermark bigger. It’s not hard to remove that - just something to keep in mind once you get better.

Wayy better than my first GFX! Good job on it

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looks good but i suggest learning blender and following blender tutorials so you have a huge headstart for beginning in GFX

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Try to move the character more to the right. The location doesn’t seem right to me. Show more of the face in the GFX. Try to add a title to so the person viewing the ad knows what you’re supposed to be advertising.

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Character is too off from Frame. Materials are too bland without any general improvement besides the bump node that came with the rig you’re using. If the background isn’t an image and is actually done in blender, grass looks way too flat. Even ignoring the technical issues, you blindly went into this without a general concept and in the future you should have more reference and a more solid plan on other work.

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The background is actually rendered in Blender

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Then make it look like the person is standing in the grass, not photoshopped by it.

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Definetly will try that next time!

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