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If you want to play this ingame: Monochrome City - Roblox

Part count ~4000

Please give me feedback on

  • how this build can be improved
  • any decoration ideas
  • Name suggestions for this build
  • Lighting

Thanks for reading!

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I love the build I do have one suggestion though. You should lower the amount of those light neon blocks throughout the sky to make it look a little less cluttered.

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I’m wondering does it have to be in closed in with walls? I’d remove them if I could. But if they cant be removed without ruining the map then leave it. Other then that very cool! Something I probably couldn’t make

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Suggestion: Change the lighting I recommend for you use “Future” lighting.

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Do you think it would look better if i just removed all the floating parts?

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They probably could be removed but I would still have to surround them it with some type of wall

Oh yes I forgot to change lighting to future thanks I changed it.

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I think that looks a lot better in my opinion.