Feedback on my 1st and 3rd GFX?

Hello!

I am a beginner GFX Artist and always wanting to improve. Could I please have feedback on my recent GFX Thumbnails?

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this is good… I like the way the lighting is done although I would try to focus the brightness in the center of the flashlight. Right now it looks like the light is coming out of the sides of the flashlight.

Hey! Thanks for the tip. I will keep it in-mind!

For a beginner, the both GFX thumbnails are great. Though, I think you can add more stuff on the background or change the way the guards are standing for the SCP one.

Thank you, regarding the way of ‘add more stuff’ and ‘change the way guards are standing’ - could you have more detail?

Maybe for example, one of the guards can be aiming at the SCP or something. I meant that it’ll look cooler if the guards aren’t all identical if you know what I mean. And for the add detail thing, maybe you can have signs or something on the background that says “Danger” or something like that. Sorry if I’m being sensitive.

I like them both.

I think the lighting is a bit off in the first one. The light casted by the flashlight makes it look the ground it being lit when it isn’t supposed to be. I’m not sure if this can be done but if there is something close to the flashlight, make reflections coming off to the player, table, and other surrounding objects.

In the second one all I think you need to add is shadows for the red lasers.

Thank you! I appreciate the feedback and will try to improve that aspect.

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Looks good - in the second one I’d suggest giving their legs something instead of just being straight