Hey there. The title explains it. I want honest feedback (be as critical as you like) on my 1st blender model. Tell me how I can improve it/ what I did wrong.
The Model with realistic lighting and a low-poly tree I made. ^
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Wheres the bucket for the well?
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It’s definitely a good model since this is your very first creation in blender it actually looks nice in my opinion. Though the design of it looks good for the well however it looks like it’s still in development I would say it looks decent, but in my opinion the well should have the hook and bucket as been said above however this should be added.
Well, as my suggestion you could try adding a more proper roof the fabric material doesn’t fit the build maybe go with a tile roof added to your model because a lot of low poly wells don’t have a simple design to it. Another thing you should add is the hook with the rope and bucket tied to the wood part. You could try adding one that looks good on the build, however that is just a suggestion you could try adding or do you got that already planned?
Overall, even though it’s simple and looks a bit unfinished, it’s a pretty neat model you have made, but there could be more things you could improve and add to it. Maybe take a look at this image to get what I’m talking the roof, it would improve your build a lot more.
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Definitely a very good model for your first Blender model, although the roof needs some extra details and a little rope on the stick will make your model more nicer.
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This looks so good, I love the cobblestone you adding for the well. This is neatly detailed and I love this!
The actual well part with the bricks is a bit large and the uhm stick? above the well that holds the bucket is not even. But good job. very good for first build