Hi there! I am making 2D art, and I would like some feedback on it. (this is my first 2d art btw)
Artwork:
Do you think I am ready for comissions? I would like some criticism too.
(I will provide a third art if needed)
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It’s kinda bare not going to lie. No shadows, no real details. Though, it’s good for minimalist art 
Maybe make the shadow more intense? it looks more like they’ve got no eyes instead of the eyes just being blacked out by a shadow.
Perhaps you could add more details to the background. They are currently just solid grey/red. I think adding a gradient would be a great help.
When you draw a hat, make sure you draw the head underneath the hat first, and then draw the hat slightly bigger than yhe heat. Same goes for hair except hair comes further off the head.
Your lines are also really messy, make sure you zoom in and clean up your line art. It’s more noticeable on tuxedo guy.
Also when you watermark, if you don’t use your username the watermark is not very helpful. Part of the point of a watermark is having your user on it so if someone reposts it, people can trace it back to you or you can prove you own it. I’ve had improperly watermarked art stolen before, it’s more appealing to claim I suppose.
A minor edit. On the first picture, the hat has a round-ish brim. Meaning, the shadow on the face shouldn’t be too horizontal, but instead shaped like a U.
Just an opinion but I think it’d look better if you had did the line art on the shirt as well.
And, as previously mentioned, your line art isn’t too good. Its a bit wobbly in certain places.
I think you still need more practice. You need to develop a light source and stick to it. Also, you may want to go back and clean up your lines a little.
Really poor and basic. Very little effort. Try to make better art by asking advices from other designers.
I would suggest having an appropriate lighting source and cleaning up your line art, some of it is a bit messy.