Here is a ad I’m going to make for my game, I think it looks okay.
What do you think?
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Looks good, keep up the good work. 
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The render used on your GFX should take up more space. The render should attract attention. Your text effect is pretty nice, but I would add a drop shadow onto it too. The spacing between “The” and “Choice” is very awkward, try to make it evenly spaced.
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The way all the font is unevenly sized is a bit off-putting. While you could get away with “Yours” being a different size choice being a different size looks weird and kind of lazy. “Choice” should also be centered between “The” and “is”.
It might just look better if “The choice is yours” was all the same size and distance and either all above or all below the character.
try using vibrant colors, highlights, brighten
Like the others have mentioned, “The” and “Choice” is awkwardly spaced and would look better if all the text was evenly spaced. To add, I agree with what @Ninja_Cat31 had said, it would be better if the text was in one side, either the top or bottom to give more space for the character rendered.
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Pretty Nice, but i feel like you could of used a different font, and maybe made the background a bit brighter, or a different color theme, and the guy could of gotten a line or something to stand on.