Feedback on my Bank Build

Hey guys! Could I have some feedback on my bank build? Thanks!

Old Version:

Updated Version:

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Looks really good. Only issue I have is there are too many dollar signs in my opinion. Maybe jut clear it up a little bit.

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very good but in my opinion there is too many dollar signs but I like the dollar sign bushes in my opinion.

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looks great! although I’d get rid of the bushes and only leave one $ on the top middle of the bank

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There are too many dollar signs, Pretty cool build tho

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Remove the dollar sign bushes, the ones in front of it, and on the door.

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The middle pillar is blocking the doorway, other than that I would say you did a great job.

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Hey, I like the style of building you are going for here. Keep up the good work. There are a couple features I would like to point out however.

  • First thing I noticed was the yellow flooring out front of the bank. As it runs down the staircase, it curves in and then returns back to being straight without even connecting properly. You might want to have a look at that.
  • The next thing, being the obvious factor, there is way too many dollar signs on the bank. There shouldn’t be any more than 2 or 3.
  • Thirdly, I noticed that although the pillars do add some depth to the build, the middle pillar blocks the front door in a sense. You might want to remove that one in particular.
  • Lastly, I would just like to point out that the build of the bank itself doesn’t fit as well together. The two main features, that being the roof and the walls of the bank look like a cube with a triangular prism on top. To fix that, try to incorporate designs that bring the two together so they don’t look so disconnected from one another.
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It looks alright, it feels like you have a mix between a cartoony style and a realistic style, it could use some work, try creating some more shape in the building and introduce some more colors to the build.

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Alright, I’ll fix some things and then update the post. I will remove some dollar signs from the top, but I used those dollar signs to fill up space. Otherwise, it looks too empty. What should I replace them with?

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Already did that, I will be updating the pictures soon.

It’s nice. But I would make normal bushes, remove the pillar in front of the door, make the door handles normal, and only one dollar sign on top of the bank.

Sorry I didn’t notice everyone replying that.

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Many people say they like the money bushes. Also, I have already improved a few things you mentioned, the pictures will be updated soon.

Changed a few things up!

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Not bad but I think it could be better!

Could you elaborate on that please?

The meshes you put in there don’t seem to match the other parts.

What should I do to improve this?

Maybe you should make the bank bigger, replace the meshes with the normal parts.

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