Feedback on my Broken's Power Core[Alpha wip] No one is replying?

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Note: So I made another topic awhile ago but that one is outdated this is the newer version
This is a core system That I created and I think I did good on it
Game: Broken's Power Core - Roblox
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It’s a melancholic build for me reminds me of the 2016-2017 period in Roblox. I wish you continued success.

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Far too basic for me, add some more detail and fix the lighting.
And on the pipes, don’t just write “Coolant”. Add an image of some sort rather than just having text lol.

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Thank you for the feedback :smiley: :smiley: