Feedback on my build for my game

After spending a lot of time searching for stylized assets for my game, I realized that just scrolling through stuff wasn’t helping so I decided to make it myself! This is my first real try at modeling, and I did it all in Roblox Studio using basic parts no Blender, just the tools in Roblox.

I’d really like to know what you think!

I’m mainly looking for feedback on how to make the scene feel more alive and a little chaotic like someone’s been working in it for hours, researching and writing non-stop. What could I add to give it that feeling?

*Heres the evolution of the build




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The room im looking at improving on! (below)


any help is appreciated THANKS!!!

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looks amazing, maybe try adding papers on the ground?

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pretty nice, do you have prior modeling experience? Because this is all quite well put-together.

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Yes! i was planning on adding that! and maybe if im crazy enough ill put writing on each piece lol. thanks for the suggestion

Kind of? i have zero clue how to model in blender, but i have messed around with
roblox studio a few times. but not enough to be called “experienced” in the modeling part of it.

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looks amazing! the office already has the the detective vibe lol idk how to describe it but its really nice good job on that

speaking of adding more chaos to the scene, maybe add not only paper on the ground as a person before has already mentioned, but add like piles of paper and maybe shelves with more paper and folders? something like this

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Awesome! and yes that detective style is what i am aiming for. I plan on adding shelves so i will definitely add clutter to with stuff like that! thanks

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