Feedback on my building

So, this is my first building I had made what do you guy’s think? 716d71d79148643b759cc755251d914a

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Please upload some screenshots or a link to a game instead, as many of us would prefer not to download it to view it.

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Done so what do you think of it?

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I think that it looks alright for your first ever build. A couple suggestions to help improve it would be to change the door nob to at the very least much smaller, and add some more of the wall on top of the door, so that it doesn’t just go from door to roof. You can also move the wedge on the roof to only cover half of it, then duplicate and rotate it so it would be a more traditional roof. Hope this helped, and good luck!

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Hi DevNetCheese, i have made a replica of your build and made it look a bit better to show you what it could look like or give you a idea.

That leaf is from my trees… from a big tree i scaled down that i made.

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Hello, CoolMeeskop and thank you I will try to improve and do better on my building’s even though I am still learning.

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Looks good for a first, but definitely work on the door handle. Also try to add more detail to the outside, for example some windows and a chimney would be nice. You should also improve the roof, I think if these changes are made the house would look pretty good. Good luck for the future!

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It’s too simple, I suggest removing the outlines and making the doorknob smaller. Add some windows and make the house bigger, adding a chimney would also make it look better. This build lacks a lot of detail that most houses have, maybe search some reference pictures to give you inspiration. It’s a good effort at your first build though.

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I made another building but this one has no windows because I just want to make it like a dark house.

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This one was rushed.

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not bad for a first build keep practicing!

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Thank you and I will hehe trying to work on slowing down and not rushing.

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Just going to add a little more of stuff I made.
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What y’all think?

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