Feedback on my Building

Hello, I am Aidan Plays!!. I am working on a game called “Explora (Story)”. I made this for the game. Here are some pictures, It is supposed to be a big city cafe.


Gameplay - Roblox Studio 4_28_2020 8_33_08 PM|690x356
Note: It is only a prop of a building that will be put along many other different models.

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looks good! Just curious what does the roof look like? If there is nothing up there maybe you can put a cylinder, then a smoke particle on it. I love the windows too, and the bushes in the front entrance. Maybe just tweak the front entrance sign too. Great job though!

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Okay, I will try to do that. The cylinder smoke thing sounds great.

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Looks really good but if I made the place the sing in front of the place a light brown wood texture with a dark brown frame around the sing to give it that extra detail.

Edit: Also make the stone windows like a white neon to add more presence.
Edit 2: Add a door handle of some sort like a knob or a bar to make it more realistic.

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Okay, I added that. It looks way better now.

The building looks really nice, but for a cafe, it shouldn’t be too blocky (actually it depends on the game concept). Try to make the cafe more nature-like, or modern-like (like Starbuck), and maybe get some references from real-life cafes too.

Overall, looks great and too blocky.

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Okay, I do not want to remodel the whole thing, but i will work on that when doing my next build.

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