Feedback on my Cromwell tank?

Hello all! I have a Cromwell tank that I’ve been working on that I would like some feedback on.

Please keep in mind that this is supposed to be moving in a game, therefore I have kept the union count relatively low. I’m aware that the tracks, drive sprockets, and wheels aren’t all-that. Thank you!

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As for pictures I modeled it after, it’s supposed to be an A27 Cromwell with the Ordnance QF 75 mm gun.

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Looks good I like design and how it looks.

Looks great! The only thing I would suggest is to put some more detail in the tracks and rims of the tank. Other than that, you did a good job at it. :smiley:

Looks great!
The only thing I would suggest is adding just a little more detail here image
(nothing excessive since you said the tank will be moving) because those spots being as plain as they are don’t fit too much with the rest of the tank being so detailed.
Maybe something similar to this, but not necessarily as detailed.
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Other than that, great job. I love it!

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Your tank is absolutely amazing.
Keep up the great work! :slight_smile:

The Good
You’ve clearly put some detail into the tank, I can see all sorts of bolts, indents, details, etc, so good job on that!

The Improvements
On the other hand some room for improvement is the detail within the wheels, they could certainly do with more as @Ghostlines pointed out. Along with this you should probably use more colours and perhaps consider adding other decals and such to fit in with the aesthetic.

An example of what I mean can be taken from this real life Cromwell Tank:

Example

As you can see it has a green colour, as well as decals all over it, the tracks also have grooves in them, and are not smooth like yours. So overall you can improve the tank by adding more detail to the lower half as well as adding in some colour and perhaps some small decals/numbers as shown in the example.

Apart from that, good job on the upper portion of the tank! Very well detailed.

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