So, a little backstory, I am creating my first ever showcase within the Roblox platform. This creation is themed for Valentine’s Day and I plan to release it come February.
I made this post to receive feedback, opinions, or constructive criticism. Also I have a deathly fear of being terminated on Roblox so if anything is against ToS please tell me.
Any and all replies are greatly appreciated.
-DesertedArtist
(Also I know the sinks are free models, I’ll build m ow later once I have most of the structure done)
The project’s theme goes is supposed to be the day AFTER Valentines Day inside the school, like the crazy party and stuff finished and this is the day after.
As always, anything is greatly appreciated.
(And on the second image, sorry about the blue outline on the brick, I, y’know, accidentally selected it)
This is very impressive, very artistic honed from experience and talent. While I am unsure whether the tap (faucet for yall americans) is a free model or not, it looks good nontheless.
Looks very nice and showcase worthy! My only feedback is on the 2nd image the brick in the window that’s supposed to be a light beam is a tad bit too much. It seems very bright like too much of a beam. Other than that I love the creativity put into this showcase and it looks very good
But just as @Cruizer_Snowman said you should probably make it so some lockers are open or, something to make it seem like there actually was a party going on.
I know you put the plastic cup on the ground to simulate what the “Typical” teens are like. But other than that it’s commendable.
