Feedback On My Daycare

I found one of my old project (4 years old) and I wanted to have some feedback(s) on it, even if it’s pretty old, that way I will be able to improve and fix my mistakes next times. So my question is : how could I improve my builds, what should I change to make it “perfect”?

Note that there is 0 free model. However, the few mesh I used are either gears and hats from Roblox or mesh from the library of Roblox. Basically, the only mesh who isn’t a Roblox’s gear or hat is : the stars, the galaxies and a post-it.

Images of the Daycare:

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Could you provide us with a game link to test it?

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Of course!
Sorry, it’s kinda messy, the 2 rooms aren’t linked together (I wanted to do a central room, but actually end up giving up on the game, about 2 years ago, since I didn’t knew how to make that when you click on a baby, you would pick him up)

Last thing, the red part is to change your animation to the baby’s animation.

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The space themed room is awesome. I love how it is detailed. However the Lobby room (green and white room) seems incomplete. There is no wall or ceiling decoration and theres nothing exciting happening. I also don’t think that the sand material looks the best on the wall. Keep up the hard work. :+1:

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I love the space room! It’s very detailed a lot to look at, but for the white and green rooms I think you could add more detail to it, maybe add some baseboards to the floor and ceiling to and some pictures! The sand texture does look a bit odd, but you could also add an accent wall with brick texturing where the kitchen is to make it stand out a bit more! :))

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I really like the space room, but:

This shelf has z-fighting

And this chair should have an astronaut helmet, planet, or star above it instead of bunny ears.

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Updated the kitchen! You can go see it in the game if you want. Feel free to give me feedback(s) about it again!

(The television have the new feature -videos- but it seems to only works in studio :frowning: )

Images if you don’t want to go in game:

Last thing, can I get striked in any way for using free decals ? Can you even get striked in any way for using free models ? (I did not used free models, but it pooped up in my head)

add some wood trimming so the walls dont look so weird when they touch the floor? Just a suggestion but it may help a lot.

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What you see which is weird IS actually wood trimming. :joy:
In my opinion, it seems pretty good… But only from near, when you’re far, it’s horrible and I don’t know how to fix it. I suggest you to look in game, since it’s way better than on a photo.

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