Hello,
I just made a fireball and a building, and was wondering if I could get some feedback on it. If I should remove anything or add anything too it. I’d also like to say hello because I just became a new dev forum member!
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The fireball looks super good. But there are spots on the building that looks plain.
For the building you could:
- Add more depth to the walls, if that makes sense.
- Add a bit of transparency and reflection and add some curtains to make it seem like there’s an interior.
- Add handles on the doors.
- Add red and white strips on the booth thing.
That’s all I have to say. Good job!
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Welcome to DevForum, your creation look’s amazing but I do agree with @o4ev suggestion. Other then that keep up the amazing work!
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Si concuerdo con @o4ev la bola de fuego está exelente, pero la casa se ve un poco simple.
(If I agree with @ o4ev, the fireball is great, but the house seems a bit plain).
Thanks man! I’ll definitely look into it! 
the firbeall doesnt look like it was made in studio, more like a 2d overlay lol
how did you make it?
Fireball seems fine.
The building looks unusual, you should look at real buildings and take reference. Add more detail. Also, remove the pipes.
that fireball is epic! did you make those little particles in blender? it looks great
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