I’m starting to draw digitaly and I want some feed back on my drawings. 
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It’s alright, however the avatar could be drawn better. Seems a bit low-res and the lines are a bit stutter-y if you know what I’m saying. Also, the line going around the head is a bit unfinished.
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ty for the feedback, I will try to improve. 
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As a first drawing it’s a good start but it’s ruined by the blur on the avatar, maybe for a drawing too it’d be better if the background wasn’t blurred out.
I see the style you were going for though.
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Personally, I like the background but I think the main avatar needs work. For example: The head isn’t a full circle (there is a small gap on the right hand corner) and the lines are rough, not straight.
Apart from that It’s good are for your first try.
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I really like it. A tip would be to make straighter lines, some of the torso is a bit wiggly. The background is very well done, I especially like the bottom area. The top of the background looks slightly like melted chocolate. Also your character’s outline around the head is unfinished.
You have great potential! I look forward to seeing more of your art!
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ty for the feedback but the head is not suppose to be a full circle and more of the head mesh of a R6 avartar
Not too shabby! I love the strong Outlines of the Noob 
ty I’m glad I improved I’m trying to comeup with my own style of drawing. 
Well it must be working :), Keep up the work!
Are you going for potential art for a cartoony-styled game? Try out some realism, as that’ll also strengthen your skill in cartoon style.
This is MUCH better than the previous one, it seems like you’ve improved.
Things I like on this, which the other one didn’t have is:
- Thick and bold outlines for the character,
- Shading on the characters body to give realism.
Keep up the great work!
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ty yea I was going for a cartoony thick outlined style
I’ll try doing realism
This is great! You have definitely improved! Keep it up 
I might stick to this style of art.
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I really like this, I would improve by adding the outlines you have done with the hands and apply that to every part of the body as well, it will blend into some backgrounds otherwise. I may experiment with that outline a bit more, applying it perhaps to the Roblox logo too. I can not wait to see more from you.
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I like the warm style you’re going for.
Outlines would help even if they’re like your other one where they’re sort of sketched on to seem rushed. The style would look great on a warm background to suite it.
Overall looks great, especially for a hand drawn product.
I definitely like this one more as there’s no blur on the image so for a hand drawn image it turns out really nicely.