Here’s my drawing,
I need some feedback on this!
Made with Adobe Illustrator Draw
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You’ll need to practice more if you want to start commissions. For instance, the arms and legs are too short and the torso is a little thin (proportions are very crucial in drawing so the drawing doesn’t look weird). Try some shading so your drawing doesn’t look flat.
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I just started recently and thanks for the advice!
Not bad! Although I would recommend using some shading, to make the drawing more expressive and less flat. There are also some ridges/bumps on the arms and the shoes which look like you drew half of the limb, then drew it again without drawing right back on the line again. I’ve never used Illustrator Draw, but there should be some kind of Predictive Stroke tool on there. I recommend using that, as it’ll make your drawing look a lot smoother. You’re really good, keep working at it! 
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I love that, it has the cartoony robloxy style! I would love to see some of your work in the future on how you have progressed! 
Keep making
-uD0ge
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The character looks a little bit like it’s shrugging, perhaps make the shoulders a bit more slanted. Maybe add a bit more contrast to the suit.
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Good, but the legs looks small! Hope you fix it but…I like how you draw.
Keep up this nice job.
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