Feedback on my fireplace!

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Heyo, I’m mainly a scripter and UI designer but I’m starting to get into building too. I made this with my free time, and would like some feedback on it.

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I’m kind of a noob at building, so I’m probably missing a few details.

Any feedback is appreciated. :slight_smile:

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Pretty good for a start, but here is a few things I noticed

  • The curve part in front of the fire place is off centered
  • Usually a fire place would have bars in front, glass, wired fence or some kind of barrier
  • No logs or some kind of fuel in the fire place.
  • Usually a fire place would have something on top that would lead to a chimney, it doesn’t have to be fancy, it can just be a rectangle.
  • Add things like a fire poker and other tools near it.

Great start, just needs a little bit of work. Just keeping working at it and keep practicing. :slight_smile:

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I think it looks good! The only thing I would change are the materials and the colors. I would make the side pillars marble or a different material so that they all dont clash. I would also change the color and material of the wood sections on the top and bottom of the fire place. Apart from that it looks great!

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On the exterior, it looks great! I feel like I’d find it at my parent’s house. However, the interior looks off. The white brick lines clash with the black bricks, and I feel that maybe some wood, or a glass/metal cover would be nice there. Also, the bricks preventing the ash from falling out are not even. Might wanna get that symmetric. Good luck!

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It looks good I would just say the bricks inside the fireplace are a little to dark they could be gray, or something lighter, but overall it looks pretty good.

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Maybe make the red darker, it is hurting my eyes… but it is pretty well made. Some parts aren’t symmetrical like the most mentioned, so maybe fix that.

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