Feedback on my first actual attempt at a build?

I was wondering what you all think of my little tiny cottage thingy

front view

corner view

Is it good, okay, bad, absolute garbage also add a possible pricing, I was thinking around :robux_gold: 5 to 10

P.S. this is my first post

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It looks pretty good for a first build. If you keep continuing you will be able to make better houses. I think you should try making different type of houses (maybe like medieval style houses). Other then that keep up the good work. :slight_smile:

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its look nice i think 5 to 10 its not worth maybe you should higher the price like 15 to 20 and also try to make a good door then you can sell it for 30 robux maybe

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Thank you for the feedback, I wasn’t expecting replies so quickly.

Edited House

As you can see, I changed the door, Created a rock pathway, and made a fun little lantern post.

Question: You cant see it in the picture, (I have my graphics down really low) but I used neon for the windows, Is it okay? And if it isn’t, then are there any non-glowy-but-still-bright alternatives?

Neon is okay. Personally I wouldnt go for such a bright color though because it feels like the sun is inside the house. Overall though you did a great job on the cottage for a first time

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For your first build, that’s pretty darn good. Keep practicing man.

I agree, maybe a darker shade of yellow could help.

Wow! This is a really nice house! Shocked that this is your first build.

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Well… I occasionally build, It’s usually just pointless things that aren’t made very well, like trees and other things. This is the first time I’ve spent more than 10 minutes on something. I really wasn’t expecting this much praise! :blush:

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Perhaps making the roof bend more. It currently looks more on the flat side. Also, good job on the edited version. I would pay for something like 30 :robux: for something like this. Keep practicing more with different sort of building, like regular nature assets, accessory assets like lamps and stuffs. It’s good to explore around with different professions, see which one fits yours :happy1:

Really good for a first build, definitely way better than my first build, you could sell it for :robux_gold: 20 but I don’t know anything about this pricing thing

That’s good for a first build, especially since its low-poly. For pricing I’d say around 20-25 :robux: for each item like that you sell depending on the size and what’s on it.