Feedback on my first ad for my Writting game

Hello, so this is my first ad ever, so Id appreciate a little feedback. The ad is for a comedy hang out gui game about writting stories with friends.

Game here if you want to check the game out

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Everything seems well layed out and spaced, not cluttered. The design (from what I can gather from the text) helps give a rough idea of the game, and the text used isn’t overdone, and minimal.

The play button, obviously fits the colour scheme, but could always be changed to a green colour, to contrast with the red colour-scheme, but thats all personal preference, and I wouldn’t be sure if that’d make a huge impact in interest anyways.

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