Feedback on my first ad for my Writting game

Hello, so this is my first ad ever, so Id appreciate a little feedback. The ad is for a comedy hang out gui game about writting stories with friends.

Game here if you want to check the game out


Everything seems well layed out and spaced, not cluttered. The design (from what I can gather from the text) helps give a rough idea of the game, and the text used isn’t overdone, and minimal.

The play button, obviously fits the colour scheme, but could always be changed to a green colour, to contrast with the red colour-scheme, but thats all personal preference, and I wouldn’t be sure if that’d make a huge impact in interest anyways.

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