Feedback on my first Animation!

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#1

Please give feedback on my first ever Animation! If you have suggestions please tell

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#2

This is really, really good for your first animation! I just have one massive issue. The magazine is clipping though the gun when it’s exiting and entering. :fearful:

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#3

Thank you! i honestly didn’t even notice that… :weary:

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#4

Wow, the animation is very smooth! This is a good start. Keep up the good work!

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#5

Thank you for the feedback I will try my best to improve!

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#6

Good job. One of the major things you can do is make the arm with the gun move while the other arm flips the mag. Other than that, great job!

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#7

the gun shoooting is good, the reload flip is linear and I don’t like that. give it an easing style. also, the flip is perfect, and it seems to overkill
gg tho

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#8

this is super good! How did you make the gun able to shoot while its not a tool? Ive been trying to figure it out but I can’t

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#9

The gun shooting is very fluid and then youve got this almost slowmo stiff toss, maybe make it a bit more smooth and fast, aside from that its amazing and I cant wait to see what else you produce

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#10

Same problem it took a while to figure out but you need a Viewmodel and I edited it with moon animator.

#11

how do you make it shoot and damage?

#12

Looks Great, but try to improve on the knockback animation.

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#13

I love your Amation and it’s very smooth :slight_smile:

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#14

I like it! Just some things you should change are, if you are using blender which I presume you are. use child of constraints on your mag, I can tell that the left arm doesn’t follow the mags movement. Theres also a little but of clipping on the magout (When you take your mag out) So I’d try moving your mag down a little bit, But its a very good start for your first, good job!

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#15

This is fantastic for your first animation.

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#16

Thank you! for the feedback actually I used MoonAnimator and I found it hard to make all the different section’s of the animation move at different times. I have improved but I am learning how to use Empty KeyFrames to cut motions at different periods of the track.

#17

Wow, that looks really nice :slight_smile:

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#18

it’s just FE gun kit you can watch a tutorial on youtube