Feedback on my first build

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Hi, I Have just compleated my first bulid of a log cabin and I Would like some feed back and ideas about what to make on the interior,

Thanks

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I’ve moved this to Cool Creations, since you’re looking for general feedback.

I’d recommend giving the logs a wood material, since the shine on the logs seems a bit odd.

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Good build if you don’t mind, can you take pictures from different angles, instead of just the front of the building? The cabin has a nice layout, and design at the moment the cabin is pretty well made and the roof doesn’t seem to match the cabin look on it consider placing an overhang roof to the cabin. Or just try finding a better material that could replace the current one.

I suggest adding some sort of chimney to the roof so it doesn’t show a plain area. In my opinion, the logs are the right size for a small little cabin. And there seems to be nothing else placed on the house, maybe try adding some windows around the house, try moving the door to the ground or place some stairs connecting to it.

Since this is your first ever build it’s a pretty good start. Try playing around with the colors a bit more. Having all logs be the same color doesn’t look good in my opinion. I would try different shades for the roof, and logs like what has been said above, maybe even place a little window on the door and a more proper door handle.

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ill give you 15/20, this is a fine build. As @jordonh23 said, try a better material like wood material in the roof. Also, the overhang might be a little bit too large. After all, it is a good start, all professionals have gone through flaws and mistakes.

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Shining wood, the window on the left has blue coming out of it and the wooden logs are pretty thick. The roof looks green. It’s not bad though, small changes and it’d be good. Idk what the interior looks like but try adding bunk beds/tv/bookshelf etc.

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Pretty cool! Door seems like it’s floating though. I’d also say since you’re going for a cabin look maybe change the color of the windows? I think it should be more orange than blue. But for a first build its pretty good!