I need feedback on my new build. I’m pretty new to devforum and I haven’t built for too long. I was hoping you, the community, could help me out and point out my mistakes! Please don’t try to hold back and tell me all that I have made mistakes in so I can improve my builds and become better than before. Thank you!!
Looks good for a first build, might wanna change the lighting tho! 
Nice work!
That is an extremely good first build!
I suggest you change the lighting (i.e. to shadowmap and add some SunRaysEffect) There are many tutorials on youtube on how to do such. I’m also not too sure, but I think the door is too big. I suggest using a reference (maybe use alreadypro’s character plugin). Other than that, it seems amazing!
For your first build this is very good. You seem to have a great understanding of roblox tools + plugins. Could you show the full pic? Only thing that needs correction is the door handle and the top 4 windows are not centered. Perhaps there are too many windows. You should reduce the fog when taking a pic 
I did not show the full picture because it included my friend’s build but here, there is the full pic: (My build is the one on the left)
Well, for your first ever build it’s marvelous, but I think it could look better if you centered the windows at the top I don’t know if it’s looking like that by the way you took the screenshot however it isn’t bad for a first build. So, good job!
You could try to center the door so the windows could be the same similar designs to the build such as hedges, trees, plants. Another thing you could change might be to try to mix and play around with lighting settings and try to find the best one that fits with the building. You just have to experiment until you get the perfect atmosphere!
Maybe some objects on the roof like vents or a exit door small plants could be placed around, but I am sure you are going to do that. But aside from that, the build is looking really nice.
This is a fantastic built. The windows on top don’t look centered to me, but that could just be me.