Feedback on my first built ever [ Homestore ]

I built this for a new clothing group, ig. Tell me what you think though.

Game Link
https://www.roblox.com/games/6829287375/TOTTALLED?refPageId=3ff2fa17-5f5f-4864-9248-244a193cc91e

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It is cool! It definitely feels a little closed and like the mannequins are super close together. also the girl doing the dance next to the empty donation boards head doesn’t move but it is definitely really great!

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Hey,

I really like the Homestore you made it looks perfect for your first time.

You should consider adding music to the Homestore, so players can listen to some relaxing music while they’re shopping. But be sure to add a “mute” music option somewhere too!

Suggestion for the future: You could probably expand the Homestore and add a small cafe area to it. I’ve seen many Homestores that have that, you should consider adding that too!

You should also visit as many other Homestores as you can so, you can get an idea of what else you can add.

Overall, amazing job.

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Thanks for the feedback. I’ll make some change on it

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The interior is empty, there is actually nothing except pictures, sign and clothes outfits stands.
I suggest you add more interior decorations. Maybe inspire some from the picture below?
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