Feedback on my first clothing pieces!

Hey there!
I’m new to the clothing designer community and wanted to share my first complete set of clothes in search for improvements or suggestions. All feedback is welcome!

Shirt:

Zeba shirt

Pants & Shoes:

Zebra Pants

All of my clothing designs are being made for the upcoming clothing group Bq Wears, Let me know what you think!

Thank you,
CalsAttire.

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I wish to see how it would look like if you were to combine those 2 into one.

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Outfit

Here is them combined!

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It looks kinda a bit unbalanced to be honest, however I like the “scar” on the black stripes lines.

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I do see what you mean, but thank you for the feedback!

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Welcome to the designing community. First off I think when showing your work you should use displays, I’m sure you can find some on YT or something. Anyways, let’s start off with the shoes. They aren’t the same. Maybe try copy and pasting them instead of doing it by hand. I see you added wrinkles at the shirt which I assume is a free asset? But it’s helpful. I recommend adding highlights to it though. The wrinkles are only visible on the white part of the shirt unfortunately. So maybe try experimenting with shading on both black and white + adding highlights to it as well while experimenting. I also recommend adding box shading as it will make your outfits look more detailed I guess you can say? It makes it look les plain.

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Thank you! Yeah, since posting this I’ve been looking at how people have presented their clothing pieces for inspiration. Future topics I create will definitely look more interestingly displayed. The shoes I didn’t notice until you mentioned, thank you for the tip of copying and pasting! I did the shading/wrinkles of the shirt from multiple tutorials but didn’t do any highlights, I’m new to highlighting but it’s a definite need. I’ll try out box shading too to reach the goal of a realistic look. Thank you so much for your feedback!

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These look great! There’s one thing I notice though, which is they’re a little blurry/not great quality, and I’m not sure if it’s just in the screenshots or it’s made that way? Other than that, I would actually love to check out of they look good on my avatar, and I’d maybe even buy it, if you send a link or something!

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Thank you so much! Yeah, the quality of these pieces aren’t perfect and the screenshots don’t entirely help it to look any better but I am in the process of redoing the set so the quality and display situation are being fixed! Currently the clothes aren’t for sale unfortunately, it’s not long until my group is going public though, so if you’re still interested, feel free to check it out! The group is named “Bloxquility Wear”.

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