Feedback on My First Design in 2+ Months

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#1

Hiya fellow developers! I recently made this personal clothing design. It’s my first one in a little over 2 months (I believe). I took a long needed break from clothing design, and am now back with a new and improved style!

Also, the watermark is my old username, since I used the same canvas as I have before and forgot to change the name. My bad haha. (You can look on my past users list if you’d like proof)

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All constructive criticism is welcomed! Thank you!

*sigh*

Unfortunately, I had a different design for this with a white tank top instead of a tube top, but that was moderated and I was warned.

Not sure why since it wasn’t revealing like lots and lots of other clothing, if y’all know what i mean :eyes:

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#2

Pretty good! I like the shading and the overall neatness of the clothing. However, to me, your shading of the creases/folds in the clothing sort of looks like scratch marks to me, and some shaded areas look a bit lumpy, but it’s very nicely shaded overall.

Looks great, keep it up!

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#4

I did add some lines to add texture to the design. That may be what you’re referring to. I’ll experiment with and without the lines.

Thank you for replying!

#5

Are you talking ab my watermark?

#7

What tattoo?? I didn’t add that onto the design.

#9

That’s the watermark, there is no tatto.

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#10

Ur shading is very original :3

I like it very much, maybe make the jacket strings white?

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#11

Thank you! I actually decided not to add jacket strings onto this design.

#12

Yeah that’s the watermark, not a tattoo

Of which I’m now realizing was my old username. Oops

#13

  1. I’d suggest adding some little stitching or detail on the ends of the sleeves.

  2. The sudden flatness of the falling shirt looks a little strange. I’d suggest having it curve more with the flatness coming a lot later

  3. This may get moderated for being too revealing. Just to be save, I’d lower the bottom of the shirt more.

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#14

Alright! I’ll work on that with future designs, thanks!

Ah I see what you mean. I was trying to make it so the sleeve was easy to work with, but yeah, it does look a wee bit weird.

I uploaded it already, and it was fine. I did have a different version that i tried, but it got moderated probably because the white shirt under the jacket was a tank top, and i believe looked to similar to something else… Welp

Although, that should be the least of their worries compared to other pieces of clothing.

Thanks for replying!

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#15

Nice work! Love the shading!!! :smile:

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