Feedback on my first ever fps showcase

[polarisprog]

Hello everyone, so i just made my first ever fps showcase and i would like some feedback on it! I don’t really know if this counts as an fps but its my first ever try, here is the link:

datastore test

Thank you!

[Gtesch23]

Get game but

There is a random line on screen(Not the swipe up bar on my phone

Keys are touchy barely going moving joystick left and player is doing a full 370

Anyways game great

Have a great day! GG,

Sincerely,
Gtesch23