Feedback on my first game

Looks really good so far. Maybe you can add like a workbench or something that an engineer would use. Like cogs and stuff maybe. The fireplace looks really odd when its not even on the other side. I like it though. Good job.

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@R02_0 Thanks once again!
Faux the engineer will have a designated section for all of their inventions etc and will be a npc u can talk to! All of the npc’s will use typewritter text for a cool way to chat with the other survivors throughout the safeplace. I will include wires and pipes towards Faux’s area that will be located upstairs… and maybe i should put a cargo lift next to the stairs?
Thanks a ton anything else?

Well, the upstairs seems pretty bare. You could add some furniture or something just to fill up the other space. I don’t really have anything else to comment on or improve though.

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@R02_0
eventually after making Faux’s engineering area that will fill up quite some space but i do agree i could look a little fuller.
Thanks a ton!

Good job. I would add more safety supplies and whatnot… some stuff seems really clunky still like the fences. I’m not sure on the other stuff though

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@Luxorz Thanks once again!
I will get onto that and make it look smoother and cleaner and I will make the engineered staircase look like it has implemented safety railing etc and over all fix up the area.
Thanks a ton!

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@Luxorz @R02_0
Hey guys, im back!
Wanted to let you know about some info i have been considering about my game.
I have been thinking about the current state of the cabin lobby…I thought maybe that can be the early alpha of the lobby(the cabin), I thought maybe i can eventually turn it into a modern styled mansion( not huge!) as i feel that would look more appealing to people as this lobby is really dark and the wood does not mix well with it, I do like the current look of it but i feel the mansion addition and a cut scene explaining why would be a relatively good update!
Any feedback let me know!
Any suggestions that i can add onto the cabin or a different building?
Plus-I am working on typewriter effect! “there will soon be a post coming for help and feedback because i have to figure out a couple of things for it…”

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I wouldn’t suggest making it into a whole mansion to be honest.
I’d probably make a ski lift outside and extend the mansion a little bit, maybe adding some snow gear and whatnot (I understand theres no snow outside but it’d be nice)

Only thing I’d really suggest is to add some minor details here and there like paintings or blankets and gear and whatnot… you should change some of the wall colors or change the wood plank material to a texture.

Since it’s a lobby I wouldn’t plan on making it too big as you wont be able to explore the majority of it before the next round starts.

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Thanks again!
Honestly thats pretty smart, Maybe i could include the mansion on a hill and the ski lift goes to the cabin maybe even a train and a player can go outside to the area and will be met with camera munipulation “excuse my spelling” and will go to it… then again during intermission this would go bye pretty quick, other wise i would like the addition of the mansion so people can explore if they are eliminated early into the round…

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@Luxorz I apologize for the wait had some personal things to attend to, I read through your post from earlier and i have no clue how to upload a texture XD i have seen examples from past games but i really have no clue on how to, if you can help me this can be hopeful extremely for me in the game and the future, also i may include an afk option if necessary for people to explore, and activate it if they step outside to the traveling area i dont want people to be bored while the round is going on and they have nothing to do, i forgot to add i will also renovate quite a lot of the cabin and the outside to make it look great!
Thanks a ton!

You can find an imagine online and make it as a decal on roblox or find a decal in the toolbox > image. Select what part you want to add a texture to and in click the plus sign beside the part… search “texture” and click it. Go back to toolbox and right click the image you want and click “copy asset ID” and then go to your texture and paste it where it says something like “Asset id”

It should work, there are videos on this if you do not understand my comment.

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@Luxorz
Thanks! I figured it had to do with that…
Thanks a ton!

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I don’t know about making it a mansion tbh, you could just change it into a log house, a log house is different to what you have built it looks like this:

It would give it a more homely vibe and would honestly look better in the long run. Obviously I know your cabin is bigger than that but obviously you can just change it.

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@R02_0
When I was building the cabin I kinda just winged it and build things without a plan, it’s somewhat unorganized and clunky but I will fix what needs to be fixed!
Thanks a ton!

@R02_0
i am considering making an entirely new lobby…
but! i will plan out what it will look like… I will include a cabin but this new lobby will be a modern mansion, not something huge but to me it makes sense for people being able to explore the building and all the extra space can provide space for all of the npc’s including toms trading post and Faux’s hideout. I will porvide as many pictures as necessary for anyone once i get more and more done with the new lobby, the cabin to me and some feedback i got made it seem as it had too many issues and i feel that a fresh start can help! The mansion will be on a perch that over looks the city mainly a mountain, explaining it being in a snowy region…
Thanks a ton!