Feedback on my first GFX

I’ve made my very first GFX in blender a few days ago, it turns out pretty nice, but I do have a little problem with the lights and camera.


(I haven’t add the background in yet)

This GFX took me about 3 hours
-2 hours of work
-1 hour of online searching

-2 hours of mistakes and errors

I would be happy to receive some feedback from you all, thank you for reading my post!

(P.S. this is my very first post and I’m very new to this :sweat_smile:)

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This is an amazing start! I like what’ve you made,

Why does it have two faucets lol, and it’s also hovering for some reason.

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I might’ve done something wrong on roblox studio, thank you for telling me lol

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Well to be your first GFX this great I love the details and the parts of the character

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Great GFX! Maybe add some paintings, or details to the walls a bit.

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This is possibly the best GFX I’ve seen from a beginner! You just need to add more details, and you will be a master at it.

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Great design of first GFX! Try to change the fridge color, it confuses me between the wall and the fridge. Change the color to grey color.

Keep up with the amazing work! :tada:

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I’ll try my best to improve it!

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Thank you, I’ll try to make more in the future.

Yeah I noticed the fridge error since I got some problems with the lights and camera, but I never thought of changing the color. Thank you for your suggestion!

You’re the fish groot from discord huh?

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The backround looks a little odd, try another backround.

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Okay, I’ll try my best to improve the background, thanks for the suggestion.

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Wow, that’s a lot of effort put into your GFX! Since this is your first GFX, I will say that it looks quite good but the lighting at the fridge(on the top) is slightly off so you may wanna fix that.

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I do love the models beside but true, you got to pick a lightroom that fits the Roblox style or the light in general. Light is one of the most important elements as these have a lot of impact on your GFX / artwork in general.

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Yeah, I’ve been having problems with the lights…

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Currently learning on youtube, thanks for your suggestion!

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For your first try, that is very good I’d say. Only feedback I could give would be to add something to the wall - perhaps a painting? I would also avoid using Nike clothing with the logo on the arm because when you twist the arm, the logo appears on the front (v). Very nice work though!

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I never noticed the nike problem, thanks for your suggestion!

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Great GFX! Are you taking commissions?

Some countries have two taps, such as where I live in England. One for hot, one for cold.

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