Feedback on my first GFX

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What do you guys think about my first GFX?

SERRATI GAME ICON (2)
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Hey,

Amazing work for your first GFX! It looks like you spent a lot of time on it! Keep up the good work and I’m sure you will have a future with graphics arts! :confetti_ball:

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This is your first GFX? This looks incredible! But, my feedback to you is to fix the lighting a slight bit! :slight_smile:

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First GFX? Its pretty damn good! Keep up the good work and try to play around how you put the text. PERSONALLY, I’m not a fan of the wave you gave it.

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Wow it looks wonderful for your first GFX! Maybe some more lighting?

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its not your first if your using a specific rig that not that much people know about and if you can do lighting.

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For your first GFX, I think it’s great!
As a fellow graphic designer, here are some things I would improve on:

  • I think the spacing between the text is too big, perhaps make the spacing a bit smaller?

  • The posing is good, but the arms look a bit too stiff as well as the legs. Maybe add more movement to the character.

  • The effects are great for a first time GFX! Maybe add a background to the image and some brush effects on the side. (unless you were going for the solid black background with fog.)

  • I think the lighting is great! I do suggest having a defined light source, (for example, the light coming from the top right corner or top left corner,) as well as a light for the face (unless you wanted the face to be a bit dark,) but otherwise I think the lighting/lightroom you’re using is great! I also noticed that on the left hand there is a weird shadow casting on it. (not sure if it’s part of the clothing or not.)
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Overall, I think this is a great GFX for your first one. Keep up the good work!

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Yeah thanks for the feedback, the shadow casting is from the clothing.

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