Feedback on my first GFXs

[Qsbrother (Thegenderbender)]

Im workin on my Third GFX now is going to be an Officier in an Bunker during WW2 no graphic content is going to be showen there.
But here are my First two GFX 1:

And My 2 GFX :

Heres where you can reach me
Discord:NightFalls#9324
And My Twitter : https://twitter.com/NightFa72068929
Sorry if im not going to response in the next hours im going to head to sleep
You can reach me everyday around 9-22 Thanks for your Time :D!

[ChromeUsage (ray)]

Hmmm. These are good first GFXs, but I have a few problems with the second one mostly. Firstly, the bags he’s sitting on don’t all touch the ground, and secondly what is he sheltering against? I recommend making more action going on behind him.

[IceTheOneAndOnly (ice)]

dude that guys arm…

there needs to be hills, and low poly grass. also,
what are those

so yeah

5/10
gg

also its GFX not GFXs (gfx stand for graphics)

[UndisiredMilitary (Gandalf)]

To be honest if you are a beginner at GFX it’s pretty good, and the 2nd GFX why are the grass like that, and also why is there water dripping at the corner of the sack?!?

[Qsbrother (Thegenderbender)]

I apreciate your Feedback and i try to better my next GFX with your Tips ! Thank you for your time

[Qsbrother (Thegenderbender)]

Thank you for your correction and i will try to better the posing the to make the grass better Thanks for your Time reviewing my GFX!

[Qsbrother (Thegenderbender)]

Well i honestly don’t know i prebuild it In Roblox Studio and then i importet it into BBlender and it was an Visual bug or i just importet poorly or on an false way but then i already had it done and renderd it and then ive sawn it but i didn’t want to rebuild BUT Thanks for your Review !