I need feedback to find what I can improve on. Keep in mind I am trying to keep it as simple as possible.
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There’s a couple of things that I would change. The first being it’s size. Try changing the screen size, at the moment it seems pretty small compared to the stand. Secondly I would make the screens material neon to add a glow to it so it looks as if it was In use. Thirdly I would change the material of the trackpad / keyboard to brick, so it looks more like a keyboard (ex. Flee the facility keyboard)
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I think it looks a bit too blocky and thick. I suggest making it a bit thinner as well as making the screen portion wider and taller in order to represent a modern monitor.
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Hey! Nice for a start but a few things, the size is wayyy to big. I also fell like the border of the screen take up more than the actual screen. Make the borders thinner.
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