Feedback on my first project/game

I have been building this pizzeria from a picture I found online.
This is the picture:
Pizza Vibes

I took a couple of days to recreate it into Roblox and since it’s summer I had a lot of free time.
Game Link: Pizza Vibes - Roblox

In case you don’t want to play the game here are some in-game screenshots:
Screenshot_1 Screenshot_2


Any feedback and criticism is appreciated.

Have a nice day and stay safe :slightly_smiling_face:

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I think this lightning gives a nice gloomy vibe, but at the same time it makes the place look a bit dead and eerie. Perhaps lighten the place up a bit? Just my opinion though. Other than that (I am not a builder), I think it looks really cool! :open_mouth:

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Its too big if your building make sure to use a dummy to see how big it is and adjust it as if it were a real shop great job though!

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This build looks awesome!! I love how you stuck with the original pizza shop aesthetic look!
The building looks a bit slanted and to tall for a roblox user. The checkered flooring is great! :smiley:
This is very good for your first roblox studio creation keep up the fabulous work! c:

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Wow! I love the look of this! One issue that I did notice is that the exterior and interior is too big compared to the normal player. Maybe consider scaling down the building.

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Pizza vibes is right! The place looks amazing good job on it!

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Its not in proportion, for example the tables and chairs rise above the counter. And you are smaller than the tables and chairs. The shop is also too big, you should have used a dummy like Coder_1 suggested.

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