I think this lightning gives a nice gloomy vibe, but at the same time it makes the place look a bit dead and eerie. Perhaps lighten the place up a bit? Just my opinion though. Other than that (I am not a builder), I think it looks really cool!
This build looks awesome!! I love how you stuck with the original pizza shop aesthetic look!
The building looks a bit slanted and to tall for a roblox user. The checkered flooring is great!
This is very good for your first roblox studio creation keep up the fabulous work! c:
Wow! I love the look of this! One issue that I did notice is that the exterior and interior is too big compared to the normal player. Maybe consider scaling down the building.
Its not in proportion, for example the tables and chairs rise above the counter. And you are smaller than the tables and chairs. The shop is also too big, you should have used a dummy like Coder_1 suggested.