Feedback on my first render!

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Hi! I recently made my first render on blender(wow that rhymes) and i would really appreciate some feedback on it. Here is the image

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Have a nice day :partying_face:

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Looks nice however the planes to make the lightroom don’t look seamless. It looks a bit off because of that. Other than that, keep up the great work!
EDIT: The sword isn’t positioned in the hand too well, maybe change that?

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its not a sword its a dagger (30 charr)

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Oh okay. The position looks off if you know what I mean.

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it doesnt have sharp edges so yeah

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Looks good! The light is bright enough but the shadows are little fuzzy.
As @pxnkinluv, the dagger looks like you didn’t hand it well or you could make it like the dagger at the back so it looks like your a Ninja :grin:
You’ve done well :+1: :+1: :+1: :+1: :+1:

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Come to think of it, the shadows doo look a little fuzzy.
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Guess you’re me now :rofl:
In all seriousness, happy birthday!

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Okay thanks! :partying_face: (30char)

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Thanks :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :v: :v:
Thank you for the wish :cake:

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same from me. Happy b-day! :partying_face: :partying_face: :partying_face:

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Thanks :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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First Of All Its Pretty Good BUT Personally, PERSONALLY. I Say The Light Threshold Needs To Be A Little Lower And The Lighting To Be A Tiny Bit Brighter But Other Than That Great Render Keep Up The Good Work!

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I don’t really see a problem with the GFX, the shadows seem fuzzy as @WebDevCom said in his post. The only thing that doesn’t feel right with me is the R15, it makes the pose looks really strange.

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i am learning lighting in blender thanks

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I think the pose looks cool :slight_smile: Idk tho

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That looks honestly fascinating for a first render; the lighting is amazing and I honestly don’t have anything to say about it other than the fact that it is perfect!

Some advice I could give, considering that I am not a GFX Artist, I’d say use a different background environment, such as a park, the avatar staying on a bench holding for example a balloon, a forest, as if they’re about to enter it etc. I hope this helped, good luck in the future, I can already see you as a brilliant artist very soon!

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Thanks! And yes im trying to do those types of gfx atm. This was my first render and im still learning blender rendering. I used the evee rendering engine and now im doing cycles to make it look much more realistic
Thanks! Have a nice day :partying_face: :partying_face:

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feet look off, and it lacks detail. Good start, but you will need lots and lots of more detail.

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i have another post about my improved ones