I tried making a simple text logo. Please give me feedback on it.
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Hi, I think its really pretty, I don’t know much about this, but I do know it might be hard so I think you did a really good job!
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I would move the ‘G’ in the back and add shading on it. Move the floatie all the way to the back.
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I tried that but I have to merge the text to make an out glow on the Text. So I could not change that
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If ur making a logo usually ppl try to add objects tht match with name, in here the pineapple mite hav been floating but in my opinion it wud b cool if u cud add lik a floating island or smth.
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Looks too simple, do some shades, apply filters to pineapple and anchor (or whatever is it), also the yellow outline is looking quite ugly. This logo still needs a lot of work.
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like I said this is my first Text logo so… also i will try to learn whatever u just said XD
Use a seperate stroke for the lettering and pictures behind it.
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I tried merging the two text together but it merged everything XD so I had to deal with it and i was new to it so like
- Change the color scheme
- Watermark should be slightly transparent
- Never remove the stroke on any letter
- Enlarge the logo
- Make the stroke thicker so small patches don’t appear between letters
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If it was transparent literally anyone can still their work and color on it since it’s easier to see the colors behind the watermark. Yeah I know it doesn’t look great with a watermark but that’s not what we’re giving feedback on.
This looks really nice for your first logo! I mean it is very simple but not bad though, the stroke color isn’t really great.
That is incorrect. If you set the transparency to around 80%, you can keep the watermark and still show the end result.
Besides, the watermark is actually an important part in a logo. You want the client to be able to see the logo in its entirety, but have the watermark show enough so it is not able to be stolen or erased.
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It looks simple and nice! Make sure that all letters are with a border that is easily visibile
The blue G has a border, but it’s barely visible. Make sure the symbol behind it is underneath the letter.
If you want some advice and feedback then I suggest doing this
- Change the color scheme on the word and make a gradient that matches with the image you’re showing
(In this case change it so that it can match with the pineapple/floatie at the background and make sure to highlight to give it more depth) - If there’s any objects/items that looks like any of a letter, to save up space you can put it in as a replacement of a letter and make it the front. If you want it to the back then make sure it doesn’t cover the wording.
- The logo gives off a tropical theme, if you want to make it maximum theme to it feel free to make the words have texture with it also like adding in waves into the letters.
Ultimately, it should look like this. I’m sorry that I had to edit it a little but I’m showing this how you can improve and stuff.
You should also change the image size and make the logo bigger. You want the client to be able to see the logo in its entirety with the details. I suggest using a canvas of 1920x1080.
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Wow! Amazing job, and your just trying to help!
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