Feedback on my game (Any help is apreciated )

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Hello everyone hope you are all having a good day

I am currently working on a new game called Nyctophilia (not finished). The point of the game is simple,you either have the choice to hanghout and “vibe” or you can explore the game and find its many secrets. I am not sure if this game will apeal to many people but none the less I was wondering if anyone could give me some tips and tricks as to improve my game.

Any help is apreciated :pray:

Link to the game : https://www.roblox.com/games/5803872402/Nyctophilia

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Hello,

So first of all when you first spawn in you are facing the wrong way. Not a massive problem just something you may want to fix.

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Did you use a free model when creating this game because I have seen this used before. Might want to script it yourself or change it a bit.

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This here does not really look like it should be there so I suggest changing it up to look different (another free model).

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To me this also seems to be a strange way you it down on it.

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The water is not all the way over here,

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This brown bit seems a bit off and should not be there to me as it looks not right.

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I also feel like you should add something at the start like a UI or a sing to tell u what to do and were to go.

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