Feedback on my game Bean House Cafe

I just created a game and I wanted some feedback on how I could improve it. Here is the link to my game:

https://www.roblox.com/games/6369386837/Bean-House-Cafe-BETA?refPageId=08a1c70f-a598-47c5-b50d-6cf8bb883914

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The building in this game is great, expanding the game a little with some more places and activities could take it to the next level.

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Thank you for the feedback! It helps me out a lot.

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I really like the game, the design is pretty good. But i saw something wrong about the texts; it was reversed.

As seen on the pictures.

And final suggestion, make other text more noticeable; like changing the colour for the players to see the menus and other message.

Overall, it’s a really good game. Thanks.

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Thank you for the feedback! It means a lot.

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Looks good. One thing I think you should add is that the tables against the walls should have charging ports(one of the cafes where I live have that). By the way, the game made me the owner. Is that intentional?
ScreenshotBeanHouse

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Thank you for the feedback! The cafes around me have charging ports as well, so I could definitely add that. But, when I was creating the leaderboard teams I felt like it didn’t look right, so when I deleted the teams and the scripts that go with them, they wouldn’t go away. I apologize, I do not know how to fix this because I am still very new to scripting.

I like it.

  • There is some Z fighting on the wood floor. I’d use Stravant ResizeAlign to fix that.
  • The employee doors look odd to me with the invisible wall, maybe add a real wall or separator brick that goes to the ceiling?
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looks good but the title of the game doesn’t fit try something like Lola’s cafe or the daily drip (you can use the names I just said if you like)
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I don’t know if it’s the picture or what but Bean House is backwards.

Clean build but maybe add more scenery/activities (as mentioned above).

Thank you for the feedback. I am planning on updating it later this week.

I love the title Daily Drip. Thank you so much for the help.

Thank you for the feedback. It helps a lot.