Feedback on my game icon

So I have a game called “pizza gaem” it’s where you make pizzas.
I made an icon for it, it’s the first icon I feel isn’t terrible but I need advice.

this is my 3rd rework


is my watermark overkill

Thank you.

if you wanna check out my game click here (the testing version has more content, still unfinished)

And yes, I’m going for a GaG-ish theme. (not the game, the icon)

What are your thoughts?
  • omg this is amazing
  • better than i expected
  • decent
  • mehhh
  • oml i need eye surgery
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thanks for the advice, when you’re saying awesome are you talking about the game or the icon

both the game and the icon

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is that z fighting in the icon?

uh oh

ill fix that later

yeah this doesnt look too good

wait are you talking about the pepperoni or smth else

yeah the pepperoni

Character floor

i see

in blender ill cut off some of the z-fighting parts (later)

(later = 6-7 years)

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ok that bottom is a little irritating :doh:

i think you should’ve scaled the pizza larger to fill that space up instead. something besides adding a textured bar!!!

the mismatched stroke colors (black & brown) on the pizza and text is kinda weird. make them match if you can!

ok review over, very nice overall

how did i not think of that

i might change it to black and white or black and gray (or grey)

for the text im going for a grow a garden style

ty

something like this? @RainingMemory

i removed the arc on the ‘pizza gaem’ title, sized up the pizza too, and changed the outlines on the pizza from brown and black to gray and black (or grey).

it says test at the bottom right cuz i have a normal game version and the testing file which is full of malware

guys is this supposed to go in creations feedback i just thought about that