Feedback on my game

Hi can someone tell me what is wrong with my game. I can’t really figure what going on and it got a dislike ratio

Here is the link: The Fiend | Horror - Roblox

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One thing: I spent about a minute and thirty seconds (much longer than an average player would) in the lobby trying to figure out how to play before I saw the menu button and clicked on it.
You should change it to a more prominent play button, as thats all it functions as currently.

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Oh, and the spare key won’t let me in the door.

what can I do for the player to understand ?

Add a background probably, that makes it stand out more.
Maybe change the color of the text, as the grey blends in with the map.

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Here are my opinions.
The please read before playing thing is too long. (Most people don’t even read it)
Menu should be replaced with play - unclear for some people and they might get annoyed that they don’t know how to play.

The main game intro is too long.
The loading is too long - I run a 3060 and other high end specs and I end up waiting about 2 minutes to load.
The cutscenes look dull.

A normal player will get bored easily.

My opinions.

  • Map is good (I mean the lobby lol)
  • Musics are fine.

But you should add a play button(or something else).Some players may not realize they need to click menu…

so what can I do to improve the cutscenes

Maybe speed them up a bit / add some short but catching lore.