Hello, I have Added more stages To my New Game If you Want to Play join the link
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If you Have any Feedback Comment Thank You For Reading 
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It’s okay, but when I play the game, the lobby should be a bit bigger and the teleporters shouldn’t be teleported back to the previous level.
I don’t know How to Fix That
Just making it 30 characters
its getting better, you fixed the jumping over red lines bit, i kinda got confused and stuck in a white box after that tho and could only teleport back to stage 2? is this where it ends for now? also stage one looks way better than stage 2, its also less enclosed making it eaiser to navigate, make your stages more like stage one and less like the tiny hallway in stage 2…Stage 1 also has better scenery, stage 2 is just boring in comparison.
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Thank you for your feedback 
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I didn’t really understand what to do when I got in the game. Maybe directing the player or saying “Touch this to continue” would be better. In the lobby, I could see the rest of the map and I could zoom out really far, which a lot of players won’t like. Respawning seems to be broken and I died instantly after being teleported to stage 3 (I think). The game doesn’t look the best, but it is a good start.
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You Die And respawn In the same level that’s a checkpoint Ill work on the zoom out Thank you for your feedback
I mean that I died immidiately after respawning once or twice then I respawned outside of the map and I couldn’t get back inside
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Things to add: Checkpoint, invisible walls to stop players from glitching out, and an overhead UI that says “Touch me to play” or something.
This game was really frustrating to me. First of all, I didn’t really know what to do at the start. Once I figured that out, I got to the second level, and then immediately died. Then I went ALL THE WAY to the beginning. I advise making at least a checkpoint system before asking for feedback. It’s really, really easy to make a checkpoint system.
Also, I think you should make some more imaginative levels. If it’s just lava and platform jumps, nobody’s gonna want to play it. At the very least, add some spinny things and try to learn some more scripting to do cool stuff.
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Hey! I see that you’ve made an obby, which is perfectly fine. But, here’s some critiques.
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The game’s confusing. I go to one stage to the next.
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There’s no spawns.
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I can see the baseplate, teleportation bricks, and more.
Anyways, it’s okay, but polish it up.
i think it needs works, here are the things I experienced:
- once I died I got respawned to the lobby (tho im not complaining since there’s a few stages lol)
- when touching the white-transparent blocks sometimes I’ll accidentally go to the previous stages
- I got killspawned in the second last stage lol
- sometimes I’ll get spawned outside the stages
- bright colors that made me squint my eyes
The teleport parts does work, and i like that! I also like the lobby too but half of the game definitely needs some work, just the ones I experienced above lol
I suggest playing the game yourself and work on list I made
overall, this is a ok game but might need work…hopefully this helps lol
In my opinion, it’s okay. But there is some stuff that i would point out.
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The teleporter in the lobby is pretty hard to see. I would change it to another color and maybe add a sign saying “Teleport to lobby” or something like that.
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The lobby is pretty small, try to make it larger.
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There’s a stage in the obby with lava and stairs going up, the problem is when you teleport there you hit the lava and die over and over, and sometimes you glitch out of the box and fall down on the baseplate. You should playtest the game before publishing it.
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I would probably add some music to the game, kinda like how Tower of Hell does it.
Other than that, good work! 
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when I respawned I got yeeted out of the world onto the baseplate. think i was about 5 rooms in when i died
The wall jump lava thing ill Edit it no Thank you ,
Sos About the yeet but Good job
Hey! Great start, I see that the game improved after receiving feedback from the community.
I am assuming the game is a WIP as the last stage (current) keeps me trapped in a box.
I’d suggest adding something such as a “winner/completion room” or adding a little sign on the wall notifying people that this is current the last stage to avoid confusion when players hit the level.
Along with that small suggestion, the spawns still seem to be buggy. After dying on stage 1 I ended up respawning on top of the entire obby (which then allowed me to see the rest of the obby).
Awesome start, keep it up.
It is not bad. I would suggest making the stages a little less tighter. Once I went pass stage 3 I had no idea what to do. Maybe you could make it easier to navigate and make the areas less tight. Other than that it was pretty fun.
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Thank you and will do
Thank you for your feedback
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