Hello this is my first game I have built any feedback or criticism wanted
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The lighting needs work, I recommend watching tutorials on lighting;
Tutorials:
( There are much more, just make sure to go searching! )
The builds should be a little more detailed, they’re also a bit too bright ( the colors ) so I recommend having them less bright, and more detail to the builds. Other than that, I also recommend a different sky-box, as the sky-box is a bit too out there.
Hope this helps you! 
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what do you mean by to out there?
The skybox doesn’t really fit the theme you’re going for in those builds that well, if you replaced the skybox and did the changes I suggested I am sure the builds will be a lot better 
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The map looks decent by looking at the images my main focus in the layout of the race track, it looks a little here and the road turns look a little stiff if possible if this is going to be a (go kart game). I would recommend placing some things that means expanding the road layout and try adding another bend and corner turns.
Seems a bit too small in my opinion or maybe small isn’t the word the layout seems a little rushed if you look at real life tracks, you’ll see the track is much larger and have (3) turns and an open road area. I think its like the track is placed in a wrong area there is more space on the left.
It would be a sort of problem players will want to enjoy the area seems a little tight and small for that amount of go karts to go around the entire track. I would recommend expanding it perhaps add different bend curves and a proper layout so players have an enjoyable experience. Adding more would be good too.
Taking inspiration from real life builds - tracks is a good way for finding a layout your wanting, at the moment it’s good, it’s just the turns are rather tight try opening them a little.
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In my honest perspective, you’ve done quite a good and well-made job when you made this on studio, though I noticed your race tracks lacks pole lights, maybe add this to your racetrack.
Notice the pole lights that give brightness to the racetrack at night
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Interesting game you’ve made here! In addition to the above points, here’s a quick suggestion:
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In order to get those accurate curves on the track, you could try using this plugin called Archimedes 2 - It’ll let you use angles to precisely place curves how you want to, it might be more efficient to utilize too. Of course this’ll take a bit of practice, but it’s worth it!
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If you want, you could even make an underground area using the plugin I’ve mentioned above, this can help your place stand out in comparison to others.
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