Hello so I made a game this summer. So it’s about underwater restaurant and underwater world and I want some feedback on it
https://www.roblox.com/games/5222636990/Underwater-world-showcase-Read-Desc
Edit: I forgot to say that this is my first game
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Really Cool , But not gonna lie the restaurant can be improved tho No offense I kinda like the ocean 
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Thank you for your feedback 
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No problem keep up the good work.
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This is a cool game however there are major problems!
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When I entered the game they told me to purchase a Samsung refrigerator which can possibly contain a virus. So try to ask for help on how to do it,
And try not to use free models just make a simple fridge, it doesn’t have to be good just make it yourself!
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Try to lower down CameraMaxZoomDistance by going into starter player and lowering down the CameraMaxZoomDistance by the property tab.
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The player if idle will go un the top of the map, try to make a barrier since you can make an endless game in Roblox but its very hard!
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There is not alot of room in the restaurant and the table and chairs are too high for the character. Try to resize it down a little bit. Also name your Stig_ProRacer into blank so it doesnt show a name or dissable name distance.
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Try to make your spawn point/spawn location invisible by setting the transparency into 1.
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Try rewarding a player, can either be a badge but if its expensive trying thinking of another idea to reward the player. Also give the player a purpose to play your game and not get bored. Try adding maybe a point system that would help. If you find any trouble always make sure that Devforum developers ect. got your back.
I was trying to improve your game by sending you this post. I hope it’s helpful!
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thank you for your feedback I’ll try to improve it, but about points, there’s no goal for me to make players stay long in game because that usually requires scripting skills and I am not scripter.
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A really unique spin on the cafe genre. It could be improved, better decor and the like. I’m not gonna lie, I know some people that would never play this game on their own due to their fear of deep water. So, it won’t get as popular as other cafes unless it gets some wind in its sails from the dev community.
Pardon the nautical pun.
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Or can you?
I have seen endless games that are randomly or repeatedly generated the further you go. It takes some complex scripting, but it is possible.
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Sure yes, the idea is possible.
But it is really hard to make.
It’s ok! Most café places don’t have points. It was just an idea. You don’t have to do it! Your game overall is great. Not a lot of people can do what you did!
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I forgot to say that this is my first game which I was working on like I never made this kind of games.
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For a first game… This is possibly the best game for a first game!
This is very impressive! Good luck on your journey of developing!
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Here is what you can improve on in my opinion:
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The introduction GUI is a free model. I suggest making your own personal GUI.
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If I zoom all the way out, the neon just looks weird. Maybe change that into a different material and make it so we can’t zoom all the way out?
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The restaurant could be worked on a bit, and how are the chairs staying on the floor if the world is underwater?
Those are some of the items that I thought of when looking at your build that you could improve on.
So far, great start. But there is a long road ahead of you.
This is just for the purpose of you improving and reflecting on your build and is not meant to be rude in any way.
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Thank you for your feedback
It is a plugin and I don’t really want to script
that’s how roblox water works it is only transparent with high graphics level
I know it’s not very perfect but this is my first game plus this game was made on old pc so Roblox studio lagged
there’s no water in the restaurant that’s why chairs are staying on the floor
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