Album concept: A polaroid (representing memory) of your dream where you were in a medieval world standing out but covered by ripped pieces of paper and paint (other memories). Similar to when you know something but you can’t point out what you know.
I am not too familiar with this style of design, however I can point out that the typography might be a bit too hard to read. The font blends in with the background and is a bit hard to decipher.
Other than that, you are trying to mimic a real world scrapbook, but the image looks very flat. Perhaps you can try to add some shadows to give it depth.
If I place the title near the bottom of the polaroid would it be more noticeable? I chose that color to make it seem that the paint used in writing that is the same with the paint smears. Should I add something like it’s own piece of paper to make it stand out?