FEEDBACK on my GFX! [UPDATED ONE, IMPROVED VERSION]

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#1

Hello, so yesterday I posted to ask feedback about a GFX and some of them said the lighting wasn’t much good and needed improvement on it, so in this post, I’ll be asking more feedbacks on the improved version as well. Please throw your honest feedbacks because I’ll try to improve more.

Old Version:

gfx
gfx2000×2000 2.53 MB

New Version:
gfx2
gfx22000×2000 2.25 MB

Thanks! :heart:

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#2

Way better than I could ever do .-.

Some ideas/feedback:

  • Add a title or slogan to make it more eye catching
  • In Blender duplicate the light twice and drag it on to both of the two shiny reflections
#3

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This is a great improvement, the character looks much cleaner, the graphics design looks less blurry (mostly) and its nearly a full body shot of the character. A few of my suggestions would be…

  • Add some light in the middle
  • Make the ‘particles’ look shiny
  • Try to include more shadows
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#4

Add a title or slogan to make it more eye-catching

  • I was about to do that but thought It’s not really needed because it was just an icon.

In Blender duplicate the light twice and drag it on to both of the two shiny reflections

  • Yes, I tried that too, but it messed and was way more bright so, I didn’t try that.
#5

Looks super eye catching, I love the orangey/yellow colour you where going for. Nice work I will love to see your work in the future.

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#6

Thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated.

#7

Hi, What did you use to make it?

FEEDBACK on my GFX! [UPDATED ONE, IMPROVED VERSION]
#8

I used Blender version 2.82, HDRI Texture and used Paint dot net to edit it.

#9

Ok, I have Blender, I’ll get HDRI, but the Paint.net link takes me to a “Webhost for sale” page, I do not know if its right our wrong

#10

And, What did Blender do? What did HDRI do? What did Paint.net do?

#11

That’s not the correct website, lemme get the actual link for you.
You can get paint dot net here: Paint.NET - Download

If you have Photoshop that would be best instead.

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#12

Blender I used it to make the render and HDRI supported the render by giving perfect lighting. Paint dot net is basically a editing software which is similar to Photoshop which can be used to edit stuffs.

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#13

Thanks for that!
(30 Characters)

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#14

This is a great improvement. Two things I noticed are that the right leg isn’t attached to the body and the scarf is clipping with the torso.

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