Hi, I’m Zack.
I’m quite new to digital art, so I was just looking for feedback on my designs so that I can decide whether or not I’m ready for commissions yet.
Here is a Group Icon GFX I made:
Please provide feedback/ratings/areas of improvement. Thank you!
Try adding a head to the woman.
I think that it is an “aestheetic” fashion of having headless people in your renders.
Try to make the render fit to the background/edit, or it just looks weird when it doesn’t look like it fits
The edges of the text looks very jagged. Is there some way you could anti-alias it? Also, something weird is happening in the back of the character’s head. 
It’s just how people make hair on roblox. It’s easier to bring the points together than carve out the shape of the head so it’s normal for hair models to look like this.
