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Hello there! If you haven’t met me yet I’m, XareezX, and I’m a GFX artist. I recently made a GFX.

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It’s okay if you don’t like it, if you have any tips/suggestions please leave them in the comments as it will improve my GFX making. That’s all I have to say. Have a nice day! :smiley:

Software: Blender
Photo editor: Photopea

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Hai ya👋🏽 @ManiacalDann! Great work on the poses👍🏽but…

-This hand should be moved backwards more so toward the handle, because its not on the handle
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  • See how the hand goes around the handle instead of gripping to it?

-The other hand should be lower down, because the end of the handle is directly aligned to the bottom of the hand rather then it being in the middle or a little below that
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  • Preferably moved down to where the line is

-The top of this tree trunk appears too flat
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  • Maybe round it a bit more or add some leaves?

-This tree trunk looks like its floating, it doesn’t extend to the ground… Instead, it levitates like a magical🪄 spell was put on it.
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  • (The bottom line is where the tree trunk ends) I would suggest extending the tree trunk a bit more so it extends to the ground

-Why is this rock so rectangular? It looks like it was cut rather than being made by nature, and it sticks out so much in my opinion.
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  • (This might just be me)

-This whole side of the background doesn’t seem to blend with the whole scene well

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  • I have no suggestion for this part other than give it another try!

-Some parts of the background are so blurred I can’t even tell what it is like here for example…
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  • So I would suggest making the GFX clearer while still leaving a little bit of that blur on it

-The scope on the rig to the right appears to be tilted backwards
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  • So I would suggest tilting it forwards a little bit more (This might just be me)

Nice job👍🏽And good luck🍀 on your future graphics!

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Backgrounds suits well with the characters :+1: I feel like there is a bit too much blur going on in the image.

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The characters are nice, but it’s too blurry overall.

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Same with @OnThaLineBabyJ, but need to add something more:

Your depth of field effect should really be improved. The lighting looks very lame and boring. Adjust the sun so we can see it and add some sunray effect and other effects too.

The texture still needs to improve quite a lot. The dirt texture quite looks like a half-life 2 texture.

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That has got to be the most HD tree I’ve ever seen

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I like your GFX, but there is something that you probably forgot.
You forgot to put the leaves at the tree. :neutral_face:

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As we can see here it is a log without leaves, but I like your GFX! Keep working on them! :happy2: